Haiku two

Frosted barren fields

Far flocks following the wind

Single bird calling

Quick steps on poor shoes

Paving bricks under water

Aching left behind

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4 Responses to Haiku two

  1. Freedom Smith says:

    The first poem is perfect for this time of the year. I like it. The second one is interesting as well. I did not know you were a poet.

  2. akamonsoon says:

    Very good Doug! Everything flows so nicely. I hope you’ll share some more with us.

  3. oh, i really like the first one!

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